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Suren: Final Chapter - The Battle for Love

  • Writer: Artzy
    Artzy
  • Nov 1, 2024
  • 14 min read

Updated: Dec 11, 2024


Here is the translation for the R18 version of Koezaru wa Akai Hana: Suren's scene Final Chapter - The Battle for Love.



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Select: Options ⇀ Events ⇀ Suren ⇀ BEST END恋しき戦い ⇀ skip to after Naala and Auri talked in private.



Suren:

“!”


Naala:

“Ha, ha, ha…”


Although I had heard from Auri that he was safe, seeing him like that made me relax.

I realized I'd been more nervous than I'd realized and let out a wry smile.


Suren:

"You're so out of breath, did something happen?"


Naala:

"No, it’s nothing… I'm glad it's nothing."


Taking a steady breath, I approached him and touched his muscular arm. Feeling his body heat, I felt even more relaxed and wanted to sit down.


Suren:

"...That guy, he's amazing."


He tilts his head as he mutters to himself.

When I ask him again with my eyes, Suren turns his face away in a sulky manner.


Naala:

"That guy?”


Suren:

"...The King of Rus. You were his fiance."


Naala:

"Yeah, well... but it was my parents who chose it for me."


Suren:

"But he loved you as a woman."


Naala:

"...Why do you think that?"


Suren:

"You're the only one who doesn't understand."


Naala:

“...”


Suren:

"If I were in the opposite position, there's no way I'd let a bastard who stole my fiancee go unpunished. I'd absolutely kill him."

"But he put the national interest above his personal feelings... I guess that's what it takes to be a king, though."

"I… could never do that."


Naala:

"I wonder. If you were the king, I think you would have followed the national interest."


Suren:

"You're underestimating me."


Naala:

"I’m not underestimating you..."


Suren:

"No, you are underestimating me."

"...And the depth of my feelings."


Naala:

“!”


He pulls me close by the waist and I collapse onto his strong chest. In the depths of his violet eyes, as he draws me close, passion flashes and sways.


Suren:

"When I saw the king embracing you today, I almost wanted to kill him..."


Naala:

"I-I was just happy to see him again."


Suren:

"But even so, he sees you as a woman. There's no way it's fun to be hugged by a guy like that."


Naala:

(So ​​that's what that look meant...)

"...You're surprisingly jealous."


Suren:

"And you're surprisingly innocent."


Naala:

"That's not true."


Suren:

"I'm telling you, you were embracing another man so passionately in front of me."

"Ah, damn it. I shouldn't have brought you here after all."


Naala:

"Hah..."

(Maybe that was one of the reasons why they were so against it...)


Suren:

"What's with that sigh? First of all, you—."

“...!?”


I pulled him by the collar and leaned his face in close, pressing our lips together.

Suren was caught off guard by the kiss and opened his eyes wide, seemingly forgetting to complain.

As I peered into his eyes, we were so close that our noses were almost touching.


Naala:

"...Show me the depth of your affection."


Suren:

"Haha... I really can't beat you."


Naala:

"Of course. I’m your wife after all."


Our lips met, the words melting on my tongue. When I tilted my face to one side and we intertwined more deeply, a pleasant numbness spread from the tip of my tongue.


Suren:

“Hm… mm”


Maybe it was because I knew that tonight our feelings were connected. Every touch was sensitive, and a sad moan escaped from my nose.

My mind was consumed by the increasingly passionate kiss, and I could think of nothing but Suren in front of me.

I entangled my tongue with his as if begging, enjoying the feel of his hot flesh.

After they had eaten each other to their heart's content, until there was not enough air left, Suren reluctantly let go.


Naala:

“…Is that all?”


Suren:

"No way. Until you say you'll forgive me... I'll be nice to you tonight."


Taking his hand, he straddled me as I sat down on the bed. For a while, we traced the contours of each other's bodies through their clothes.


Suren:

"What is your wish...?"


Naala:

"Mm... lots of kisses..."


Suren:

"Roger that…”


He put his fingers under my chin and pulled me towards him. I pressed my lips against his and he sucked my tongue even harder than before.


Naala:

“Hm… ha…”


Suren:

“Ha… Naala”


With him straddling me like this and having my mouth explored, I began to feel like I was already accepting what was inside of me.

Occasionally, his hard, muscular thighs would press up into my private parts, deepening the illusion.

My insides were compressed and I felt a hunger that made my hips tremble.

In the back of my mind, I could sense the sensation of my entrance already starting to leak, and I felt a little embarrassed.


Suren:

"...Sorry."


Naala:

“?”


I looked at him with a questioning expression. Then, his wet lips touched my ear, and a voice mixed with a bitter smile was blown in.


Suren:

"You must be tired... I don't think I'll be able to let you sleep tonight."


He pressed his hips against me as if to demonstrate, and I could feel his already-hardened penis at my base.


Naala:

"Hehe... Just one kiss has made you this bad?"


Suren:

“Shut up…”


Unable to refute anything, he looked away, which I found incredibly cute and made my heart ache deep inside.

I wanted to see more of Suren's different faces. That desire made me bolder than usual.


Suren:

"D-Don't touch me like that..."


When I touched his hot, hard bulge, it jumped slightly, like a horned creature.

Suren narrowed his eyes and pulled his shoulders together as if to endure it. Just that expression made the depths of my loin mysteriously heat up as well.


Naala:

"Does this feel good...?"


I placed my hand through the fabric and stroked from the base to the tip.

When I ran my fingertips back and forth over the part that was reacting particularly strongly, I felt it get even harder.


Suren:

"You idiot... I told you to stop..."


Naala:

"I'm usually the one who gets bullied, so I might as well take this chance to get revenge."


His breathing is strangely seductive and arouses my desire.

Usually, I'm so busy being dominated that I don't have time to observe, but maybe watching his reaction like this is exciting.

I felt like I understood a little bit about how Suren usually feels, and it made me happy.


Naala:

"...I wonder if it would feel even better if I touched it directly."


Suren:

"Huh?... What!?"


Before he could stop me, I got off his lap and loosened the front of Suren's pants.

Perhaps because of the place and the situation, I was in such a good mood that I could do anything tonight.


~Picture~


Naala:

“!”


Even though I was the one who did it, I was frozen in shock for a moment. When I pulled down the front of his pants, something thicker and longer than I had expected popped out before my eyes.

Now that I think about it, we've done it many times, but this was the first time I'd seen it up close like this.


Naala:

(Something this long and thick has been inside me many times.)


The veins throbbed as if they might burst, the taut underside of his penis spoke of its hardness, and the rawness of the tip was like flesh with a thin skin stretched over it...

No matter how I describe it, it couldn't be said to be beautiful, but when I thought of it as Suren's, I strangely found it endearing.

Carried away by excitement, I enveloped the hot thing in my palm.


Suren:

"Wait!"


Naala:

"You do things like this to me, but you won't let me do it to you? That's not fair."


Suren:

"There's no need to do that."


It's not fair that we can only do one or the other.

Suren tried so desperately to stop me that I opened my mouth in desperation.


Suren:

“...!?”


I took a bite. I tried to take the tip in my mouth. An indescribable smell suddenly entered my nose and I hunched my shoulders. It might taste pretty bad.


Suren:

"If you're going to make a face like that, then don't do it."


Naala:

“Shuth up”


Suren:

"S-Stop talking… with it in your mouth...!"


Naala:

“Why… Dosh ith hurth?”


Suren:

“Ngh!”


I can't speak well because it’s so big. Even when I stretch my jaw joint to its limit, it only covers about two-thirds of it.

This is the only one I’ve ever seen so I can't say for sure, but I think they're probably on the larger side.


Naala:

“Mm… ha…”


After a while, I got used to the smell and had more room to move my tongue.


Naala:

(But what should I do from here?)


Remembering a story I had heard from another woman before, I moved my head back and forth with it in my mouth.

The smooth tip of it brushed against the roof of my mouth and sucked it deep into the back of my throat.


Suren:

“!...ugh…”


Naala:

(I wonder if it hurts...)


His eyes were tightly closed, and it looked like he was enduring it, which worried me.

Worried that I was hurting him, I sucked him up while checking his reaction.


Suren:

“Ha… I’m… about to…”


That said, it's still only just begun, and it seemed to take a much longer time than when Suren did it for me...

Convinced that he was being reserved, I took him in even deeper.

Although I felt like gagging a few times during the act, I did my best to control it.


Suren:

“...!”


When I looked up, I saw Suren's Adam's apple twitch. The sight made me feel strangely aroused. My heart rate increased along with his heavy breathing.

The thought that I was giving Suren pleasure made me feel a sense of ecstasy.

Wanting him to feel even better, I increased the speed at which I rubbed him inside my mouth.


Suren:

"L-let go!"


I grabbed his hand which was trying to push me away and swallowed the tip deep into my throat. I nearly choked but managed to hold it in.

As I strained, the inside of my mouth narrowed, and the pressure on his penis increased.


Suren:

“Ngh… ha!”


As if unable to bear it any longer, the expansion explodes in the back of my throat. Surprised by the sudden impact, I widened my eyes and was unable to move for a few seconds.

I feel a trembling spasm inside of my body.


Naala:

“Mm…”


A unique smell and taste spread in my mouth. After a while, I realized it was the taste of semen, and that Suren had reached climax.


~End Picture~


I slowly parted my lips and swallowed the liquid that had been building up on my tongue.

Before I even considered whether it tasted good or not, I was filled with satisfaction that I had made him feel good.


Suren:

"Hey, did you drink it?!"


Naala:

"Oh, was I supposed to spit out?"


Suren:

"...Hah. Seriously, where did you learn this?"


Naala:

"This was my first time."


To be honest, it was quite awkward, and I wasn't used to the taste.

I swallowed the slime of semen that stuck to my throat, grimacing a little as I swallowed it along with my saliva.


Suren:

"Well, if it wasn't the first time, I would have killed the other guy."


Naala:

"...Hey, did I do it right? Did it feel good?"


Suren:

"You're asking me this in this state?"

"I mean, just the thought of you doing it with your mouth is enough to turn me on..."


His voice was so quiet I couldn't hear him. He leaned forward and lightly tugged on the hem of his robe twice.


Naala:

"? What is it?"


Suren:

"Geez, you already know the answer, right?"


Naala:

"I don't know because I'm not a man."


Suren:

"...What about you?"


Naala:

“Huh? …!?”

"Wait, Suren!"


I was suddenly pulled onto the bed and my clothes were skillfully stripped off.

I tried to close my legs but he pushed them away with his arms, and before I could stop him, his lips were on my private parts.


~Picture~


Naala:

“Ah!?”


Suren:

"Doesn't it feel good to have me lick you like this all the time?"


Naala:

"Hmmm... I just... ah"


This isn't the first time my private parts have been licked like this. It's become a regular occurrence ever since it happened at a time when I was struggling to get what I wanted.

But no matter how many times it happens, it's just too embarrassing and I can't stand it.


Suren:

"Ahh... Perhaps you were getting excited while taking me...? You're overflowing so much... You're so slutty."


Naala:

"Ah, no... hmmm!"


The tip of his tongue traced each petal, gradually approaching the center. Already dripping wet, it reacted sensitively to any movement and trembled.

His lips stroked my bud, making my back arch.


Naala:

"Ah, ahh! No, no...!"


Suren:

"Don't run away. This is payback for what you did earlier..."


Naala:

"That's, ugh, huh... I don't need that...!"


Suren:

"Hmm... but... it would be 'unfair' if only one of us did it, right...?"


Suren was really mean, getting his revenge. I glared at him with teary eyes and he stuck his sharp tongue into my entrance.


Naala:

"Ah! Ah..."


Suren:

"…It's so mushy today that it doesn't even need loosening."


Naala:

"Don't say that..."


As he mocked my lewd behavior, my juices started flowing again. Suren released my lips, entangled them in his bony fingers, and sank them inside me.


Suren:

"Look... two are already in..."


Naala:

"Ah, ah! Ah..."


His fingertips kneaded my insides, then slowly moved in and out.

The knotty joints of his fingers caught on my sensitive spots and at the entrance, and a numbness-like sensation rose from my waist.


Suren:

"You're clenching me so much... aren't you satisfied with just my fingers?"


Naala:

"Oh, no way..."


It certainly felt good, but deep inside I felt a sad trembling, as if this wasn't enough.

An indescribable heat was settling in my lower abdomen, and I felt like I would go crazy if left unchecked.


Suren:

"If you don't like it, tell me what you want me to put in there..."


Naala:

“...”


I hesitated to put it into words, but his skillful fingers pursued me. Finally, unable to bear it any longer, I grabbed him with a tiny whimper.


Naala:

"Put yours… put yours in..."


Because I had just come, the image was even more vivid, and I felt like I was saying something obscene. I was so embarrassed that my face was on fire.

But just imagining that moment of that thick, strong thing entering me, piercing my deepest recesses... made my entrance twitch.


~End Picture~


Suren:

“Do you really want it that badly?”


Although he had only just ejaculated, Suren's penis was already erect as soon as he took off his clothes.

It was hard and taut, stimulating sensitive spots.

The tip, covered in the sticky nectar, looked as if it was about to go in at any moment, but then it moved away.


Naala:

"Mm, give it to me... I want you..."


Suren:

“...”


Even though he was the one who wanted me to say it, Suren stared at me with a shocked look on his face. I felt the body temperature of the part we were touching had risen, and then I heard the sound of him swallowing his saliva.


Naala:

“Suren…?”


Suren:

“...”


Naala:

“Kyaa!?”


Suddenly, my body was turned over and I let out a small shriek. While lying face down, my buttocks are grabbed high, exposing my wet private parts to the night air.

Embarrassed by the fact that I was completely exposed, I twisted my hips…


~Picture~


Naala:

"Ahhh... Aaahhh!!!"


Suren:

“Ngh…!”


His hot wedge penetrated my deepest part in one go, and my sharp insides began to flicker. As he moved his hips, caressing my cervix, a squelching sound rang out and a torrent of nectar spilled out.

Perhaps because he'd been teased for so long, my senses were going haywire.


Naala:

“Ah… ha…”


My insides were numb and I couldn't exert any strength. As my lower abdomen spasmed, I heard a spiteful whisper from behind me.


Suren:

"What, did you come just by me putting it in...?"


Naala:

"Ah... no way..."


I wanted to deny it, but my body couldn't lie. My head was hazy from the orgasm, and I couldn't argue with anything.


Suren:

"Even this part is so sharp..."


Naala:

“Mm!”


As he said this, his hands reached around in front of me and pinched my nipples.

The tips of my nipples, which had already become hard and pointed without even being touched, became so stiff with the added stimulation that it hurt.

A sharp numbness ran through my chest, and I couldn't help but twist my hips.


Suren:

"I-it's even... more tight than usual tonight."


As if to test my condition, the hot wedge slowly stirred inside.

My cavity, already sensitive from just reaching orgasm, felt intense pleasure even with the slightest movement.

Pushed to its limits, my insides didn't complain of pain, but instead convulsed as if asking to be opened further.


Naala:

"Ah, haa... n-no..."


Suren:

"What's wrong? You've got completely soaking wet..."


When his honey-covered penis was pulled out, the hair wrapped around it as if chasing it. The sensation of the wet mucous membrane being pulled was irresistible.


Naala:

"I... I feel like I'm going to die just from this... so..."


Suren:

"It's too early to give up, isn't it?"


Naala:

"Huh?! Ahh!!"


He thrust into the most sensitive part inside with a familiar movement.

Fearing the pleasure that would be so strong it would hurt, I pulled my hips back, but he grabbed me again and thrust even harder.


Naala:

"Ah, ahh! Not there, no!"


Suren:

"It's not that I don't like it... I want more here, it's twitching..."


The time between thrusts gradually became shorter, and I was shaken violently the more I slid up.

Light exploded repeatedly in the back of my eyes, and my head and cavity began to melt into a gooey mess.


Naala:

"Ah, ah! Hi, ah, ah...!"


He grabs my chin from behind and twists my head. His lips immediately meet mine and I suck passionately, our tongues entwining as we exchange warm saliva.

When the liquid I couldn't drink slips around the corner of his mouth, his hot tongue scoops it up.

The stimulation is so strong that tears start to spill from the corners of my eyes.


Suren:

"That’s a nice face you’re making..."


Naala:

"Hmm...?"


As our lips parted, an overly sweet voice vibrated my eardrums.

My head was hazy and I couldn't comprehend what he was saying, but I could tell that Suren looked happy.


Suren:

"Hey... does it feel good...?"


Naala:

"Huh?...Ah! Ah! Ah...!"


Suren:

"Don’t tell me it doesn’t feel good after all...?"


What is he saying? He is already making the depths of my body wet.

As he rubs my sensitive spots, my mind becomes fuzzy and active.


Naala:

(Ahh... perhaps...)


Was he worried about what I said at the very beginning?

When I understood, my love for him grew even stronger, and my chest tightened. My insides, in tune with my feelings, pressed down on Suren's.


Suren:

"Wow, it's wrapping around me..."


His ecstatic voice entered my ears and resonated in my loins. Seeing Suren feeling it made me happy and it felt good too.

My heart had softened and my honest emotions easily spilled out.


Naala:

"Hmm, ah... it feels good..."


Suren:

“Hmm?”


Naala:

"It feels so good! Ah, ah... give me more, more... Suren."


Suren:

“...!”


Suddenly my hips stopped moving, and my vagina swelled in dissatisfaction.

I didn't want to be put on hold at such an awkward point.

I turned around slowly, and Suren tightened his grip on my swaying hips, preventing him from diving deep inside me.


Naala:

“Suren…?”


Suren:

"You idiot, that's too late now... that's cheating."


The mass inside me increased, and I could almost feel the blood pulsating there.

Knowing that I was on the verge of reaching climax, my stomach throbbed with joy.


Suren:

"Damn, please stop moving...!"


Naala:

"But it’s moving on its own..."


The insides of my body were tightening in proportion to my emotions. I unconsciously tightened, and a short groan escaped from Suren's mouth.


Suren:

"Ah, are you doing this on purpose? I won’t be able to last long..."


He slammed into me once, as if to punish me. Perhaps because he'd stopped halfway, the pleasure hit me even deeper, and I was pushed to my limits in one go.

I felt the waves of orgasm approaching again, and my spine shivered.


Naala:

"Hmm! It's fine... let's come together..."


Suren:

“...!”


As I pleaded with teary eyes, I felt my insides being pushed open. Just that sensation made the hairs on my entire body stand on end.

He immediately resumed his intense thrusts, and the sound of flesh slapping together echoed through the room.


Naala:

"Ahh! Ahh! Suren! Suren... !!"


Suren:

“Ha, ah…!”


I was on the brink of climax. My mind went blank at the same time as Suren's hips began to spasm.


Naala:

“Ahhhh!”


Suren:

“Ngh…!”


Just before the stiffened object explodes, it is pulled out, and a hot spray wets my back.


Naala:

“Ah, ha, ha…”


Suren:

“Naala…”


Naala:

“Mm…”


After a light kiss, Suren collapsed next to me and pulled me to him.

I rested my cheek against his muscular chest and listened to the slightly rapid beating of his heart.


Naala:

"...Why didn’t you..."


Suren:

“Hm?”


Naala:

"...Nothing.”


I wanted to ask why he didn’t cum inside today, but I was too scared to say it.

Because in truth, I already knew the answer.


Naala:

"...I hope we can go home together tomorrow.


Suren:

“Yeah…”


Just from the sound of our voices, I felt like we could understand each other's inner thoughts.

–Perhaps we wouldn't be able to go home together tomorrow. Suren had probably thought the same, so I think he had thought about what might happen to me and didn’t want to leave me behind with our child.

Even though I knew he acted out of concern and kindness, I felt sad and wanted to scold him.


Naala:

“Suren…”


Suren:

"Hmm?"


Naala:

"Please hold me closer…"


Suren:

“...”


I wish our bodies would just cling together and never let go again.

As he held me so tightly it hurt, I experienced a bittersweet night…



~END~



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